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Friday 16 August 2013

Persuasive writting

                                                         persuasive writting

The topic being addressed is children should not work from the age of eight.

I disagree with this topic because I believe it is not fair and I will state my arguments to support my position.

Children should not work from the age of eight because they are under age and will become uneducated .Education for children is very important so they can have a good life when they grow up to be adults . Children should only start working when they turn 18 and when they have finished college and graduated. Working at the age of eight should be illegal.

Children should not work from the age of eight because it is wrong to treat kids like slaves and make them  do all the dirty work. Eight year olds should be learning at school instead of working .

Eight year olds should not be working for companies .Children should be able to run around and learn instead of being slaves and doing work for the bosses and managers. Its not fair on kids that they have to do the work and they just sit and watch them it’s just cruel and it’s slavery.

I strongly agree that children should not work from the age of eight because that is the time they should be learning as I have discussed in this text.